This was pretty bad. I expected something more, but it was just the same trite, juvenile young adult romance. The kind that seems to be written by a 12 year old who knows nothing of love or human relationships. The plot was silly, over dramatic, convoluted, and under-developed. Once you think it can't get any more ridiculous, something else completely unnecessary and dramatic happens (for one paragraph, never to be mentioned again).
Overall, this seemed more like bad fanfiction (of some already bad media) rather than a real story.